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The Shining World

Prologue

The Shining WorldAs she stood near the entrance to Green Echo Park singing at the top of her lungs, it occurred to Mi the Nordling that it might not be a good idea to call too much attention to herself in this unfamiliar world.

But it was so exhilarating to break free of the confines of her own world, to at last find herself in the world of the Creator! True, Mi had passed through several worlds in her quest to find the place known as the Shining World. But here in the world of Pay-Gee the Creator, she sensed with a mounting excitement that she was drawing nearer and nearer to her destination.

Only a little while earlier, Mi had noticed sounds coming from a building with tall stone spires and stopped to look inside. There was a group of small beings like herself - "children" as they were called in this world - sitting in a circle. In front of them stood a woman, singing and moving her arms rhythmically, urging them to sing along with her.

All night, all day, Angels watching over me, my Lord

All night, all day, Angels watching over me.

Ever since she'd discovered she could sing many more notes than the one she was created for, Mi had been eager to learn more of these melodious collections of notes that people in this world called "songs". The music these children were making was so sweet and soaring it made her tiny heart feel like it would burst. She resolved that she would learn this song, right here, right now! She would not leave this window until she knew every word, every note of it.

Now here she was, a short distance away from the building with the tall spires, at the entrance of the large green place known as a "park" in this world. She could see many trees and wondered if one of them could be the Tree of Good and Evil - not that she had any idea how she would be able to tell. Just inside the gate, she noticed a statue of an Angel, with great stone wings draping from its shoulders and running down to its base. What a wonderful thing! Mi thought to herself - to learn a song about Angels and then to immediately encounter an Angel. Almost involuntarily, the notes of the song burst out of her and she felt a deep, transporting joy as she sang.

After a few moments she noticed that a group of children in the park had stopped what they were doing and were looking at her strangely. Reluctantly, she stopped singing and began walking toward the children. They had resumed their game. It looked like fun and she hoped maybe they would invite her to join in.

She stood off to one side, watching shyly for a few moments, till one of them - a boy - raced over and poked her on the shoulder. Mi shrunk back at first, thinking he intended to hurt her. But then he called out the word "Tag!" and she could see from his expression that it was just part of the game and now it was her turn to go find someone else to poke on the shoulder. She ran after the others, laughing. This game wasn't so different from the game she used to play with the other Nordlings back in Notherland, when they pretended they were being chased by swarms of flesh-eating bugs.

Mi almost caught up with one of the others and was about to poke her on the shoulder when the girl slowed down momentarily and looked over toward the street. A man was standing there watching their game. The girl sped up again, but Mi managed to get close enough to touch her.

"Tag!" she shouted triumphantly.

She was worried the girl might be mad at her, but she just shrugged good-naturedly.

"Now I'm it."

Mi stood facing the girl, whose attention was drawn again toward the street. Now the man was walking toward the park entrance.

"Is that your dad?" Mi asked the girl, proud that she knew the casual word for "father" in this world.

The girl shook her head.

"That's not my dad," she said emphatically. "I thought he was yours."

Mi almost started to explain that she didn't have a dad, that where she came from there were no fathers, but stopped herself.

"If he's nobody here's dad, then he's a Stranger. You should never talk to Strangers."

"What’s a Stranger?" Mi asked.

"A person you don’t know and your mom and dad don’t know either," the girl replied.

"Why can’t you...?" Mi started to ask, but the girl had resumed running.

Mi looked over toward the entrance. Now the man called the Stranger was walking past the statue of the Angel, and was heading right toward her.

"Hello, little girl." said the Stranger.

"Would you like to go for a ride with me?"

Copyright Kathleen McDonnell 2003

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